Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Lines that Speak

Trust but verify!
Editing sucks, but sometimes a bit of writing speaks well:

“In the wake of their . . . loss,” Freyja replied.
“You mean in the wake of me emptying a full magazine into Alfred Waru’s face.”
“Blunt and to the point,” Freyja replied.  “But always accurate.”
“Well, I practice a lot,” Del replied.

From Company of the Damned coming soon.  Soon-ish.

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