With
a shark-like response, there was a rush of blood and adrenaline in Del’s ears
that sounded like the ocean as it came in for high tide. A red mist descended over her eyes. She ceased to see as she normally did,
catching only this or that as she focused her attention. Instead, she saw everything from the general
to detailed. Her vision was that of a
battle-lord for whom there was no other life.
The large picture and the minutia were thrown together, and sifted by a
mind that was honed to the strategy of both the moment and the immediate
future. Large and small, Del knew the
outcome of this battle even before she joined it.
The
joy of it and the triumph soared inside her.
The
absolute glory that was in her strength, her might, her power sang in her
blood.
It
was only small wonder that her cousins, the Nephilim of old, had sought to
carve empires; smaller wonder that most of them succeeded.
Succeeded
for a season.
She
had no intention to add to their ranks as the honored dead.
Two
more steps and her SIG .45s came up in her hands.
They
barked their greeting and threw fury at the rogue.
The
first two bullets whizzed past the rogue’s head, only millimeters from the
target and impacted on the concrete behind her, exploding as they ended their
brief but fiery lives in a concussion of sound and shattered wall. Del
didn’t hesitate in correcting her aim, and sent three more bullets to thunder
home, striking the rogue in the head, throat and chest. Del
moved forward as the rogue dropped behind the altar with a howl of pain.
From
the right came robed figures. Each was
clad from toe to tip in a garish yellow, rendered more so by the obscene red
glow. Blades were produced from under
cassocks and growls issued from out of cowls.
Del
didn’t have time to aim.
Does the ocean sound different as it comes in for high tide?
ReplyDeleteMaybe just on the west coast? It's a rushing, pounding almost desperate sound as it pushed higher and higher along the beach, swallowing everything it comes into contact with.
DeleteI used to live by the ocean and I knew exactly what you meant. Well done excerpt. Would definitely read more.
DeleteThanks Jesse. It's hard to strive for realism when you're writing about angels and demons and whatnot, but I do give it what I can. :)
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